1. I felt that the book could have been longer. So much happened and it seemed that Ms Edwards just dot pointed scenes to try and get through them faster. Some scenes could have been cut, some scenes could have been longer.
2. I'm not a big fan of "magic/devine intervention"... This is my personal view and understand many other readers like this element to their reading. I felt it was a little out of place.
Apart from my two points, I really liked the book and will look out for more of Ms Edwards books in the future.